Poetry Reviews
By Grace Cavalieri
APRIL EXEMPLARS 2016. Best Poetry for National Poetry
Month
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The Last Fifth Grade of Emerson Elementary School by Laura Shovan.
Random House/ Wendy Lamb Books. 227 pages.
Manual for Living by Sharon Dolin.
University of Pittsburg Press. 89 pages.
Crave by Christine Gelineau.
NYQ books. 83 pages.
Pictures at an Exhibition: A Petersburg Album by Philip Metres.
University of
Akron Press. 75 pages.
The Uneaten Carrots of Atonement by Diane Lockward.
Wind press. 94 pages.
Antigona Gonzalez by Sara Uribe. Translated from Spanish by John Pluecker.
Les Figues Press.173 pages.
Rapture by Sjohnna McCray
(winner of the Walt Whitman Award of the Academy of American Poets.)
Graywolf. 61 pages.
Receipt by Karen Leona Anderson.
Milkweed Editions. 69 pages.
Easiness Found: Poems and Paintings by Fan Ogilvie.
Fan Staunton Ogilvie Robin Enterprises. Tisbury Printer.231 pages.
Utmost by Hiram Larew. I.
Giraffe Press. (Iris Press.) 33 pages.
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The Last Fifth Grade of Emerson Elementary
School by Laura Shovan.
Random House/Wendy Lamb Books. 227 pages.
What took us so lyrically long? Finally! A book-length narrative in free verse
for children. This
is poetry that reads like a novel with real characters, real aspirations, true
sadness and joy, and a
genuine mission. There are 18 kids in Ms. Hill’s 5 th grade at Emerson
Elementary School; and
the school is to be torn down to make way for a supermarket. And our plot (in
verse) comes
through the voices of the 5 th graders, How to have a voice? What is civil
disobedience? What
color to paint my toenails? How will anyone get the Board of Ed to listen to us
kids?
Author Shovan has found the niche for young consumers with a story of soul and
heart. On each
page a distinctive character tells his/her story. Shovan’s calculus is simple:
get true blood in the
veins of real people, then let them speak for themselves. Here are real life
situations—the boy
whose step-mother is mad because he left his candy out and his brothers ate it,
but it was a gift
from his real mom and cannot be replaced! Then there’s the best friend who used
to play chess at
recess with Edgar “Now he’s always with George Furst, / working on secret
projects.” There
are wishes, lies, and dreams, just the stuff poetry is made of; and here young
people are
connected to their words with emotional strengths – unifying themes within a
strong plot. There
are diversified kids, Latin, Arab, all races, and current topics; Shovan makes
every risk a success.
Although the book shows young people with a passionate debate, we never forget
they are 10-
year-olds upholding the public trust of their school. And through this, they
find out better who
they are. You’ll buy it for your kids or classroom, and then you’ll read it
twice, just for the
delight.
December 23
Jerusalem
Norah Hassan
In Jerusalem my grandfather had a lemon tree.
Every day, we went to his house and picked lemons.
My sister squeezed them; I added sugar and soda water.
We said, “We are drinking sunshine.”
In my new country, I see bare winter trees. No lemons.
Every day after school, my sister goes next door.
She watches our neighbor’s baby.
Our apartment is so quiet, so small;
At school, I feel quiet and small.
But when Shoshanna sits with me at school,
I can’t stop talking. She wants me to tell her
about Jerusalem and the lemon tree.
Shoshanna has invited me to her house
during winter break so I can teach her
how to make fizzy lemonade.
I hope our whole class goes to Montgomery Middle.
If we’re sent to two different schools,
how will we stay friends?
I want to go back to Jerusalem one day,
and tell someone who never came to America
about my friend Shoshanna.
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Manual for Living by Sharon
Dolin.
University of Pittsburg Press. 89 pages.
Sharon Dolan can leap lines like nobody’s business. Her poems burst with energy
from interior
rhyme and rhythm and startling abruptions. The first half of the book is an
actual manual with
good apparitions— poems are titled: “Pay No Attention to Things That Don’t
Concern You;”
and, No One Can Hurt You;” and, Everything Happens for a Good Reason” etc. etc.
these are
worth listening to, not as cautionary tales which we expected, but boundless
acts of grace and
style. The second half is “Black Paintings” (perhaps Ekphrastic). The third
section, “Of
Hours,” Is an arc of time: poems starting from 4:30 AM to ‘bedtime.’
Geographically, Dolin’s
poems use space in a way that speaks to each word. She’s affiliated with the art
world and this is
apparent in form and content. Her meanings endure because of her jaunty and
unique
philosophical approach – Dolan writes decibels of lyric-driven poems that pay
off.
Let Me Thrum (6 a.m.)
a new lay upon this lute for you
Let me hum the new day
of loose strife and lily
Let prayer plant and mallow
let heads and hearts let heels
and thumbs feather and fins
and all things fleet and slug
antennae and furred
all sing > all shirr > all rub and buzz
and fling their call to you
in song-light as the mist still clings
as the settled dew thins
as all the attendant things
in your rising yolk-red grin
unfolded and rebegin
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Crave by Christine Gelineau.
NYQ books. 83 pages.
Gelineau records all “creatures great and small.” The horse is a long-standing
metaphor in her
work and represents resiliency and strength. Also it’s the promise made for
movement and
power. Poetry was at her side as she watched First Born: “Last of August and she
struggles
into her separateness, muscles of/ unsayable needs and hungers…” And Second
Born: “He
develops his own lop-sided crawl/on hands, knee, and a turbo-boost/ from the
other foot…”
And there is music in her bone as she writes Ocean: “… Contrail of silver
bubbles rises.
Arcing into the undertow/ she thins; one treasure is as good as another to the
sea.” Personal
context is her form with the body heat of felt life. The X factor in writing is
to be present; and
then to subordinate oneself to the poem, as in honoring a friend, in Paterson
New Jersey (for
Maria Mazziotti Gillan :) “ ..she sprints/ with her bundles and her pocketbook,
/her keys
bristling in her hand: / by the time the punk catches up/ enough for her to see
the knife, her
car door/ has slammed already and/ she is leaning into the horn/ and stabbing
the key in
the ignition/ like there is no tomorrow/ unless she makes it/ with her own two
hands.” This
is not to seek the truth but to see it. Gelineau is good at this. She has the
will and the way. She
knows if it’s organic, and of the moment, it’s real.
Backing a Colt for the First Time
It’s exactly the fact that you could die
that lets you forget you will die.
As separate now from the muck
of the everyday as you are from the ground,
even the mortgage, your son’s
calculus grade, or your husband’s mother
ebbing away in her hospital bed
replaced by instinct,
rhythm and sinew,
by unpredictability
and the quickness beneath you.
This suspension
in danger and pleasure is bodily,
pure
and compelling whole.
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Pictures at an Exhibition: A Petersburg
Album by Philip Metres.
University of Akron Press. 75 pages.
In reviewing Metres’ previous book, I wrote: “Sand Opera emerges from the
dizzying
position of being named but unheard as an Arab American, and out of the parallel
sense of
seeing Arabs named and silenced since 9/11.” I naturally entered this book with
preconceptions. Pictures at an Exhibition is an esthetic, not political,
wonderland, although art
by all nature is political. His blueprint is Musorgsky’s 1874 musical
composition, and this leads
us through a tour through St. Petersburg, Russia— visually and symbolically. His
poems leap
from psychic to actual sights, letters, stories, Russian words and sounds. He
approaches a scene,
a work of art, a character and equates a similar— but not exact – logic to the
event, creating a
virgin world to an existing premise. Strangely I came away with a strong feeling
of what it is to
be alone in another country, clinging to its artifacts and iconic rationales.
Although I’ll never get
to St. Petersburg, Metres improves the quality of my life by his gifts.
Skin of the building, sloughing
Second. Gnomus
The king ordered the three greatest artists of the realm to paint his portrait.
He was badly deformed, his left eye having been gouged out and his left
leg maimed. The first artist produced an impeccably accurate portrait, down
to the socket of the missing eye. Outraged, the king had the artist be-
headed for his insolence. The second artist, fearing the fate of the first,
painted a healthy king, handsome beyond compare. The king had him
beheaded for his dishonesty. Now the third artist, after a sleepless night,
composed the painting the would save his life: in the picture, the king,
mounted on horseback, was pictured in right profile…
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The Uneaten Carrots of Atonement
by Diane Lockward.
Wind press. 94 pages.
Lockward is sassy and sweet and sad and funny. She writes of marriage, divorce,
motherhood,
the usual—but nothing is really that, by her hands. While Shopping at the Short
Hills Mall she
turns her old husband in for a new model.” I walked in a store and bought a new
husband. /The
old one had conked out and was minus/ irreplaceable parts…for an extra $50, this
husband
would sing/ in the shower without restraint… My old husband was worried about
the
thickness/ of his heart…I worried about the hardness…” Lockward takes everything
and turns
it on its head. She can make tragedy beautiful and heroic. In The Two-Door
Mailbox with Gin
she finds a half empty martini glass with toothpick still intact, and speculates
“…whatever
drunk/ had passed my way was gone/ leaving this fragile momento/ among the
darkness, the
bills, / and the pile of bad news.” She writes a soliloquy In Defense of a
Cashew puzzled from
a phrase from Elizabeth Bishop’s poem, thinking what Bishop might have thought:
“… What
the cashew started her new lover/ completed, the two of them lost in the
lushness/of Brazil,
love ripening like an exotic fruit…” How I Dumped You, a prose poem sounds like
an aria
with every line alive: “… As a baby loses its first hair, the fuzz gathering
like the tufts/ of
tumbleweed, the mother getting use to loss in small bites I lost you hair by
hair…” Lockward
is awake, happy, angry, baffled, vengeful, loving. She makes room for everything
within a single
poem and I wish she lived next door.
YOUR BLUE SHIRT
Left behind like a cicada shell
it hangs, so incredibly
blue. I slip into it, wear it like skin,
the body I loved all over me—
my breasts, my back, my neck—
your scent in the weave.
All day I breathe you in,
put off the final disrobing.
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Antígona Gonzalez by Sara
Uribe. Translated from Spanish by John Pluecker.
Les Figues Press.173 pages.
Sara Uribe was born in Queretaro and now lives in Tamaulipas, Mexico. Uribe is
inspired by
Sophocles’ Antigone. Her poetic prose is a series of fragments that are
utterances against the war,
grief, death, and brutality surrounding her and others in the wars of Latin
America. Antígona is
searching for her dead brother, Tadeo, who compares to Sophocle’s character,
Polynices.
Antigone mourns her brother, Polynices, who was killed and never allowed to be
buried. In
parallel, Uribe’s Tadeo has been taken and there’s no help for Antígona, no
authorities to turn to,
no surcease from sorrow. Victims are “disappeared” and abductions are never
resolved, yet she
searches. Antígona recalls times past with her brother, remembrances, memories,
in a journey of
questions with no end. It metaphors thousands of others; and so the book is made
up of news
releases, quotes from articles, emails, testimonials from journalists, reports
from crime scenes. In
the Greek drama, Antigone is bereft with no body to bury; and author Uribe uses
Antigone’s
words “Will you join me in taking up the body?”
Here are some shards from this powerful book:
“…So as not to forget all the bodies without names are our bodies…”
“…Keep quiet Antigona .Don’t go after the impossible…”
“…Some nights I dream you are thinner than ever. I can see your ribs. You’re not
wearing a shirt, and
you’re/ barefoot…”
“…Chihuana. Chihuana. April 17. / A four-year- old child was found dead. His
mother/had
reported him disappeared on April 6…”
“…No. Tadeo, I wasn’t born to share in hatred. What I want/ is the impossible:
for the war to stop
now; for us—for/ each of us wherever we find ourselves—together to/ build ways
to live with
dignity…”
“… I’m also disappearing, Tadeo… All of us here will gradually disappear if no
one searches/ for us, if
no one names us…”
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Rapture by Sjohnna McCray
(winner of the Walt Whitman Award of the Academy of American Poets.)
Graywolf. 61 pages.
The portraits of Sjohnna’s parents are full-form and pungent – a crucible for
the feelings we’ll
find in the other poems. Sjohnna’s first poems are also strong predictors that
the poet is a change
agent in personal narrative. He drills deep to get to the truth. What a lesson
to writers – how to
frame iron filings to make the magnet. Start with tiny details. His work can
also soar and
fortunately does not escape his hand. Poetic form holds exactly the proper
engagement wanted.
He wants the reader to know someone’s in charge – that salience is measured; and
governs a
hotbed of emotions. We can trust the page. Sexual relationships are joyous, and
frightening,
speaking of union with a new language. Also shown is its opposite: cold
singularity. That’s the
magic of his story. The emancipation of loneliness. He talks without fear. He
means what he
says. Each line moves up the scale and increases the risk but Sjohnna doesn’t
back down. He
sweetens the ache of courage with craft. I think he has word power. I believe in
him.
The Widower
The real test of love happens afterward,
the spin cycle over, plates rinsed,
the dish towel threaded through the door.
It happens when you’ve picked his best suit,
shined his shoes and had the right rouge
applied – so it seems he’s aged
without any kind of pock or blemish.
Belief in your own mythology–
the apartments, the toasters, and the mixers.
mismatched silverware and such.
Will it lead a man back? Will he come
when all the roads lay open?
Will he settle for the dusty light that shines
through all those kitchen windows?
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Receipt by Karen Leona
Anderson.
Milkweed Editions. 69 pages.
The poetry gods are tickled pink with this one because of its playfulness and
intelligence.
Anderson writes about food and clothes—but the poems take on the character of a
life being
alone and not being alone. These poems have a personality stamped on them that
make them the
poet’s own, without danger of imitation. This is what I like about poetry,
thoughts that are
original and speak to a new generation about what can be done to tell a story.
Each poem shows
a different part of our poet and many poems are comments on a mercantilist
society.
There’s some speed riff in balancing verbiage and Anderson shows the control it
takes to give
performance value without showboating. I hope we see more from this artist with
her stylish
ideas about society. She’s full tone and full tilt; and yet keeps centered in
her emotional
projections with the wonderful accuracy of language.
Pizza Night
Kale, local, wilting in on itself.
Organic egg: a frittata except
you have only a corruption of
conventional cheese. Something
that was asparagus; some oil
you built with pesticidal
spices. Olives full of black
holes. If you had made the right choices,
you’d hardly need to mix matter
with what doesn’t matter. Yogurt, plain,
but from a big box. You wouldn’t
use a faulty cog in your rocket,
so why this scattering of rotten
parts? Strawberries, unseasonable
and furred with silvery fungus,
a really bad mistake. Corn
cut from the same metallic cloth.
The cheese magnet-blue with mold,
gravitational. Or would you, did you,
unschooled and awake, imagine
all chemicals revolving inside
you, blame antimatter for how
much quicker it sucks in? There are
the mushrooms gleaming white
in the dark, collapsing and slick in the bright
air. All at once you are: needing to feel
full of the worst thing you can
without meaning anything: dark, a star.
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Easiness Found: Poems and Paintings
by Fan Ogilvie.
Fan Staunton Ogilvie Robin Enterprises.Tisbury Printer.231 pages.
If you want to read startling poetry and you respond to the stun of art, then
you might as well get
them both at once in Fan Ogilvie’s new coffee table book. “A table book for
display” has the
sound of faint praise. This is the opposite — I mean it’s simply a work you
wouldn’t want lost
on the shelf; and one you’ll want to pick up – to remind yourself what artists
are capable of. The
cover is a witty painting by the poet Ogilvie and the book is peppered by her
bold works of art.
The poems are of everyday life: countertops, Campbell’s soup, a trip from LAX
airport. She
includes quotes from luminaries who informed her energies, with remarks that
show courage and
will. I’m touched by the physical beauty of the book with its self-command,
literary talent, and
sensuality. The entirety’s a promise that the artist’s role in our society
cleanses and inspires
confidence. In this sad and sometimes corrupted world, we can choose to turn to
moral fire – the
artist as standard bearer of our culture.
All The Difference
Two hands on the keyboard go forth strike the keys without
knowing where is F or G or A or B or D or C
your fingers need to know where the notes are and what song
you wish to play as they say by heart but if the heart dies
in the middle of finger playing then what what to say or do
with no heart in the matter who or what will resuscitate if
such an operation is possible in this case or desired but oh
such a charged word would assume a heart to feel
it can not therefore be desire simply still form desiccating
sits deathly still waiting as patient at the keyboard.
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Best Chapbook for National Poetry Month
Utmost by Hiram Larew. I.
Giraffe Press. (Iris Press.) 33 pages.
Is it possible that every page of a book can make us happy? This is nonsense I
think. I’d rather
not say such a thing; yet I dare you to read Utmost and not feel the validation
of every “…big
“…knobby knee in a fairy tale sky.” Larew misses “… the rugs of my childhood…”
He
believes in “…clay huts and their importance… and …”To swell summer as apples
do…” He
wants “…To learn what’s what from older shoes …”
Buoyance in itself is not what makes light in poetry. It’s the philosophic
underpinnings that
change anecdote and utterance into resonance. I used to tell my children to find
one miracle a
day. Larew must have listened to his mother.
Your Life
Is not the top but the hillside
Not apples but their boxes
Not first or second place but the coming rain
Not eyes so much but far off voices
Not smart but smeary
Not wings but wooden stairs
Not the good silver but rather fog
Not a perfect circle but vines
Not seeds but open windows
Not completely true but some embers
Not forever but a dot.
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Grace Cavalieri is the author of several books and plays, the latest a Memoir:
“Life Upon The Wicked Stage”
(new academia/scarith.) She’s founder and producer of THE POET AND THE POEM for
public radio, celebrating 39 years on air, now from the Library of Congress
All reprinted from the Washington Independent Review of Books.